Saturday, May 20, 2006

Knot of Isis

3.. 2.. 1..
is how we count down the fun days
1.. 2.. 3..
is the cadence of doom
3.. 2.. 1..
is how we start the fast race
1.. 2.. 3..
is don't make me count to ten
3.. 2.. 1..
is a New Year and champage
1.. 2.. 3..
is a drummer's fresh start
3.. 2.. 1..
is a candle to blow out
1.. 2.. 3..
is the strikes and you're out
3.. 2.. 1..
liftoff

6 Comments:

Blogger AngelConradie said...

i like it!

11:34 PM  
Blogger Diamond said...

Points for originality ... first done ... and just because I like it so much!

1:27 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

I like it too. An interesting approach too.

8:23 AM  
Blogger sweet trini said...

nice juxtaposition.
walk good.

11:22 AM  
Blogger chelene said...

You're always so clever. I would never have come up with that.

5:16 PM  
Blogger Writeprocrastinator said...

"3.. 2.. 1..
is how we count down the fun days"

And 1,2,3, the fun days go by too fast. All of life's important moments in eighteen lines, nicely balanced too.

11:32 AM  

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